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Lake Kracken Page Layout by mattwatier Lake Kracken Page Layout by mattwatier
I am asking for criticism. I am posting these pieces for the next few weeks so I can make changes and edits that I think is in their best interest. They are all being complied in to a collection of mythology based in the state of Maine. So please post changes or questions of flaws you see in these pieces so I can send in the best art I can when I submit this to the Publisher in the next couple of weeks.

Other pieces in the collection are:
Title Page
SPRING: Mud Gremlins
SUMMER: Knitters
SUMMER: Sapphire
SUMMER: Lake Sirens
SUMMER: Keepers of the Blue
Fall: The Four Winds
Fall: The Milky Way
WINTER: Ice Troll - a.k.a. Jack Frost
WINTER: Snow Cow
WINTER: Lake Kracken
OCEAN: Perry Winkles
OCEAN: Queen Victoria
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BeezLeaz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007
I love the fish's expression!

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The last two paragraphs have a smaller font than the first two.

In the second paragraph you switch between singular and plural, which makes the paragraph a bit confusing.
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tears-of-eternity Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007
i love the expressions in the second pic, especially the fish. too cute
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mattwatier Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
LOL
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CelestriaSun Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007   General Artist
Your picture with the fish is awesome. The first pic doesn't really look like it's under water, Maybe ad more watery texture ,here. :)
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mattwatier Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
I will look into it. And I just want to take a moment and thank you for all the help. I am not offended at all. Grammar and words are my weaker points. My strength is creativity, story structure, design, and pictures. I post things here to get feed back, editing and critics. It all helps me grow and develop a better product.
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CelestriaSun Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2007   General Artist
:)
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enstyledesign Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007
I like the second picture a lot. it really does add to it. maybe since its a water creature you could add waterdrops or something
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mattwatier Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
do yo mean on the page layout? it would have to be water stains but it was the plan to add some stains to the page.
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enstyledesign Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007
Cool. The layout is great.
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enstyledesign Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2007
the sunken mountain titan!
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mattwatier Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
yes He needs more. Maybe a second painting. I am brewing some ideas but the real world has gotten in the way of my fun. Oh well have to pay today's bills too I guess.
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enstyledesign Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2007
that would be a good idea.
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