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Night of Lights
Page Spread from my upcoming book THE SECRET MAGICS OF MAINE


I am asking for criticism. I am posting these pieces for the next few weeks so I can make changes and edits that I think is in their best interest. They are all being complied in to a collection of mythology based in the state of Maine. So please post changes or questions of flaws you see in these pieces so I can send in the best art I can when I submit this to the Publisher in the next couple of weeks.

Other pieces in the collection are:
Title Page
SPRING: Mud Gremlins
SUMMER: Knitters
SUMMER: Sapphire
SUMMER: Lake Sirens
SUMMER: Keepers of the Blue
Fall: The Four Winds
Fall: The Milky Way
WINTER: Ice Troll - a.k.a. Jack Frost
WINTER: Snow Cow
WINTER: Lake Kracken
OCEAN: Perry Winkles
OCEAN: Queen Victoria
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I like this story. The first paragraph seems a bit choppy (the last sentence mostly).

In the second paragraph, "the" shouldn't be capitalized in the Flame Keeper (unless The Flame Keeper is his proper name in which case all the "the's" should be capitalized).

Sick of me yet?