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Keepers of the Blue
Page Spread from my upcoming book THE SECRET MAGICS OF MAINE
I am asking for criticism. I am posting these pieces for the next few weeks so I can make changes and edits that I think is in their best interest. They are all being complied in to a collection of mythology based in the state of Maine. So please post changes or questions of flaws you see in these pieces so I can send in the best art I can when I submit this to the Publisher in the next couple of weeks.
Other pieces in the collection are:
Title Page
SPRING: Mud Gremlins
SUMMER: Knitters
SUMMER: Sapphire
SUMMER: Lake Sirens
SUMMER: Keepers of the Blue
Fall: The Four Winds
Fall: The Milky Way
<a href=[link]"> WINTER: Ice Troll - a.k.a. Jack Frost</a>
WINTER: Snow Cow
WINTER: Lake Kracken
OCEAN: Perry Winkles
OCEAN: Queen Victoria
Page Spread from my upcoming book THE SECRET MAGICS OF MAINE
I am asking for criticism. I am posting these pieces for the next few weeks so I can make changes and edits that I think is in their best interest. They are all being complied in to a collection of mythology based in the state of Maine. So please post changes or questions of flaws you see in these pieces so I can send in the best art I can when I submit this to the Publisher in the next couple of weeks.
Other pieces in the collection are:
Title Page
SPRING: Mud Gremlins
SUMMER: Knitters
SUMMER: Sapphire
SUMMER: Lake Sirens
SUMMER: Keepers of the Blue
Fall: The Four Winds
Fall: The Milky Way
<a href=[link]"> WINTER: Ice Troll - a.k.a. Jack Frost</a>
WINTER: Snow Cow
WINTER: Lake Kracken
OCEAN: Perry Winkles
OCEAN: Queen Victoria
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Looks really good.
In the second sentence I would use "Keepers" not the full name again.
The last paragraph you use "dwarves," which you haven't used to refer to them before so it kind of takes you off guard.
Oh, and there's an extra space between "out of Maine" in the first paragraph.
BTW, I love these stories (not just the illustrations , which are awesome)
In the second sentence I would use "Keepers" not the full name again.
The last paragraph you use "dwarves," which you haven't used to refer to them before so it kind of takes you off guard.
Oh, and there's an extra space between "out of Maine" in the first paragraph.
BTW, I love these stories (not just the illustrations , which are awesome)